Fiction Flows: A Replication and Reinterpretation of Narrative Sequentiality

Narrative flow emerges from the interplay between memory and expectation, shaping how stories are both produced and understood. To operationalize this construct, Sap et al. (2022) propose sequentiality, a language-model-based measure of sentence-level predictability, and report that imagined stories flow better than recalled ones. We conduct a large-scale replication across multiple language models, examine how modeling choices shape the original findings, and test generalization beyond crowdworker data using passages from published fiction and narrative non-fiction. Although the original contrast replicates under their initial formulation, it diminishes substantially under alternative specifications, suggesting that it reflects properties of the measurement setup rather than a stable feature of narrative flow. By contrast, fiction does appear to exhibit a robust sequentiality advantage over reality-bound genres under a minimal contextonly formulation. However, mixed-effects analyses indicate that this advantage is not reducible to standard coherence measures, underscoring the need for further theoretical and empirical grounding of narrative flow.